Thanks to a prompt from Read, Write, Poem and a half-memory of a story someone told me once, and I’ll swear it’s true… I wrote a poem today at lunch. The final image came to me with brilliant clarity as I sat reformatting the calendar, and I carried it down with me. Our lunch room has good tall windows, mostly full of sky, for writing by.
The British garden club makes a naked calendar
Hail the gentle ladies on a fine May morning
who created a new scheme to raise funds.
Among their arching borders of roses
and roses, Levant, Gloire de Dijon, Bridal Pink,
they sat and stooped and bent over
a watering can. Who raised the first arm
of a neat beige jumper? Who slid
the first wool over her cropped head
and lowered the first hem to the grass?
The earth crumbed over their feet,
and on the cool pine boards of the sun room
they appraised slowly their mature skin.
Did the teapot hold more heat, held
in a bare hand, with the oak chair
cool on bare legs, stuck with sweat
to the small of the back?
They said this was the hardest part.
They had never seen each other so
or any women sweat since birth.
And now, after the years of speeches,
seed catalogs, planned beds in winter,
to drink tea laced with orange, clove,
and lean a bare midriff against
the planed table gave them grace.
Did they speak, unrecorded,
as the water poured from the spout,
or laugh a good, round laughter
as the first woman knelt in silence
in the turned earth, with the sun a dazzle
over a shoulder, and the full-throated roses
open and lifting from her breasts
in the sweet wild air?
February 19, 2008 at 3:00 am |
“to drink tea laced with orange, clove,
and lean a bare midriff against
the planed table gave them grace.”
Such beautiful lines! And the last two lines! You captured the spirirt of these ladies with grace, and very sensual prose! So much earth and garden. I’m pretty sure I heard about these ladies, but now I want to google them and see their “bravery”!
February 19, 2008 at 3:03 am |
This is really good. (I’ll have to give it another read in the morning – too tired to do it justice now.)
February 19, 2008 at 3:45 am |
this is a delight… not only to read,, but to visualize… what daring women,, and what a quaint idea by todays standards… it almost makes me wanna say….. awwwwwww……
thank you for sharing this….
February 19, 2008 at 1:01 pm |
Those words are so very visual. I felt as if a movie is unfolding in front of my eyes.
ode for convoluted crevices
February 19, 2008 at 2:24 pm |
A wonderful poem! So many delicious lines here.
And it is indeed a true story. Emily used to own the calendar, I think. The ladies did it to raise funds for leukemia research after one of their husbands died from the disease. Here‘s a lovely NYTimes article about it…
February 19, 2008 at 3:33 pm |
Surrounded by British gardens in the heart of rural England, this made me feel right at home.
February 19, 2008 at 4:52 pm |
I’m impressed that you were able to bang this out on your lunch break – way to go! The ending is particularly good, but the whole thing is quite vivid.
February 19, 2008 at 9:09 pm |
One beautiful description after another! And all done with dignity and respect!
February 20, 2008 at 5:43 am |
The lines were all beautiful, word choice spot-on, and written with such humor and grace.
February 20, 2008 at 3:47 pm |
A nice visual account of this newsworthy story, well written!
February 20, 2008 at 9:00 pm |
I love how well-tuned your language is to the story. I particularly liked all the roses’ names and how fully sensual the entiregarden became.
February 23, 2008 at 12:44 am |
This whole piece has such grace! And though it begs to be read (more than once) it is paced so well, with a tentative-but-sure tempo, that it is perfectly unhurried. I’ll be back to read this again.